Denny S. Bryce

Six Sentence Sunday & Denny’s Eye Candy – Week 16

by | Nov 20, 2011 | Denny's eye candy, six sentence sunday | 11 comments

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Actor Alex O’Loughlin played a vampire on “Moonlight” a few years back, and was one of the inspirations for Gideon. Photo snagged from Internet by Denny S. Bryce

Six Sentence Sunday sure comes around fast. But I’m sticking with my current WIP for one last week…then we must move on:)…It’s about a vampire FBI agent struggling to keep his promise to a witch.

Gideon gulped down his drink and walked over to the wall of windows. Stretching from corner to corner, floor to ceiling, they faced east, overlooking Lake Michigan. He loved watching the water strike the shoreline in the moonlight. The black waves surged with gray and white sprays that shot high into the air before vanishing into the night. He could see well in the dark, his eyesight keen in the shadows, too. And since the water at night was mostly shadows and white foam, he could watch the lake until dawn.

There it is! Now go and read more Six Sentence Sunday!

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11 Comments

  1. Gayle Ramage
    Gayle Ramage on 11/20/2011 at 4:59 pm

    Great description!

    • Agenir
      Agenir on 04/15/2012 at 4:25 am

      She :KERRY O’BRIEN: Doing research for this irnitveew, it struck me there’s been a certain amount of fascination for this feminist in her stilettos. There was one quote that Quentin Bryce has kicked more chauvinist male butt with her high heels than the whole boiler suit brigade put together. Did you have a boiler suit?QUENTIN BRYCE: I had a boiler suit, I never owned a pair of jeans, I had a fantastic boiler suit. It got a lot of wearing, there was a lot of comment in the women’s movement in the ’70s about what was ideologically sound and particularly in one’s apparel. It was about liberation of our bodies, our appearances, breaking down sex stereotypes, all those things.

  2. sue
    sue on 11/20/2011 at 5:07 pm

    Very peaceful scene. will be sorry to see him go

  3. Denny S. Bryce
    Denny S. Bryce on 11/20/2011 at 5:40 pm

    Thanks Sue. He will be missed…from six sentence Sunday, but 85000 words in…I need to edit, and get him and the manuscript ready for trying to sell it:)….here's hoping it gets published one day…I do appreciate u stopping by.

  4. Jayel Kaye
    Jayel Kaye on 11/20/2011 at 8:23 pm

    and I loved him
    in moonlight. A good inspiration. The description here was really nice. good luck with the edits

  5. Guilie
    Guilie on 11/20/2011 at 9:44 pm

    I remember a previous excerpt of this–good one! You built the setting here very nicely–almost felt the water spray myself. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in finding a publishing home for it!

  6. Christine Warner
    Christine Warner on 11/20/2011 at 10:16 pm

    Great description…could easily picture it. Enjoyed your 6

  7. Vivien Dean
    Vivien Dean on 11/20/2011 at 11:31 pm

    Love the mood in this. Well done!

  8. Karysa Faire
    Karysa Faire on 11/21/2011 at 4:25 am

    Lovely scene, beautiful visuals. I always look forward to reading your six! 🙂

  9. Pippa Jay
    Pippa Jay on 11/22/2011 at 11:07 am

    Nice descriptions of the water.

  10. Carmen DeSousa
    Carmen DeSousa on 12/04/2011 at 7:47 pm

    Very vivid. I can picture the scene. I like that! 😉